[u]In Game VIP is required to apply. Players can comment on your application. Application will be denied if you currently do not have VIP. Please follow this template and allow time for review.[/u] [b]In-Game Name: SSH JINQ App Yite Current Character Rank: Valkyrie / apprentice Steam ID:STEAM_0:1:10203250 Time on VALKYRIE: close to a week 4 or 5 days Warns/Bans(please explain):N/A Your Bounty Hunter's name (name used in game once you become a Bounty Hunter): Yuru Shaso Why do you want to become a Bounty Hunter? Because i love bounty hunters and i love the ps4 game where you play jango fett and your a bounty hunter roaming around capturing and getting money and sometimes killing bosses Explain why you should be whitelisted as a Bounty Hunter: I love the bounty hunter concept a person who captures other people for money and i think i should be whitelisted because im active alot and would love to roam around capturing people Your Bounty Hunter Character's Backstory: was born on December 2nd loved playing pretend bounty hunter with friends and always wanted to become one when he grows up little did he know. one day raided by the tusken raiders his family friends everyone was killed besides him because the mandalorians came in and saved him and made him a foundling then began to be taught step by step how to become a mandalorian and a bounty hunter learning how to kill the race who killed his friends and family and learning how to kill jedi and sith at the same time then started learning how to not just use a gun but to fight with his own bare hands if he needed to one day during his training on tatooine where him and his master had made a base a group of sith come to raid 2 apprentices 3 lords and a darth ( at this time he was around 16) he put on his armor and got his master to come fight with he grabbed one of the apprentices by the neck while shooting the other apprentice trying to kill him he chokes the apprentice to death then shooting the other one he looks over to his master seeing that this darth keeps trying to slice threw his beskar he shoots whistling birds piercing 2 lords and going after the 3rd one then the 3rd lord tries to kill him since he doesnt have beskar he drops the dead apprentice shoots at the lord the lord deflects it back at him he dodges then the lord jumps behind him he turns around and the lord slices up his blaster then the Mandalorian in training punches the lord and the lord force pushes him then he pulls out his rifle trying to kill the lord fires 1 shot gets deflected fires another one gets deflected he looks over at his master as he sees his master being choked he then shoots 1 bolt at the darth and kills the darth then he looks back to the lord to see hes in front of him then the mandalorian in training kicks him in leg tripping the lord then he takes his gun and shoots the lord killing him then he goes over to his master and sees his master has a hole in his leg he was stabbed bleeding out his master dies leaving him alone again for the 2nd time in his life filled with rage he grabs his master speeder bike and his jet pack then loads his masters whistling birds on and takes his vibro knife and puts on his masters armor he was now a fully ready and capable mandalorian he then packs food and water then he goes on a hunt for sith asking everyone he can on his journies he finds tuskens filled with rage he runs with the intent to kill equiped with his knife he sees a tusken but then his good will comes over him and he leaves them alone he knows it was only those tuskens no other tusken deserves the same fate that one tusken who killed his family deserves he finds a ship ( at this time hes 18 ) and he hijacks it to go to korriban where he finds 1 darth and 2 apprentices and the darth has a bounty on his head then he kills 1 apprentice almost the first 5 minutes he sees them fires at the other apprentice but this apprentice is competent enough to reflect it back where he throws his vibro knife and it kills that apprentice and then the darth actually puts up a fight he rushes at the darth with only his beskar armor and his fists he punches the darth then the darth slashes at his beskar then he shoots his whistling birds the darth cut them all up but giving the now bounty hunter enough time to shoot the darth in both his legs then he captures the darth and claims the bounty getting 50k credits for his efforts then he goes on to make it known that he will find you and kill you if you are a jedi or a sith Describe what it means to be a Bounty Hunter on Valkyrie Jedi vs Sith: To me it means capturing people and collecting bounties to make money Supply an image that sums up your Bounty Hunter Character.[/b][img]https://d.wattpad.com/story_parts/306048059/images/1470401586c0464e816117482340.jpg[/img]

+1 really chill guy

-1 Just gonna be consistent here, the backstory is really short. My advice is make a life story. Take a look at mine if you're running low on ideas. Edit: Made it longer, very good. Just gonna be Neutral because of the mass advertising in OOC.

[quote][url='/user/584732']Somethin Like The Void[/url] said previously: -1 Just gonna be consistent here, the backstory is really short. My advice is make a life story. Take a look at mine if you're running low on ideas. Yours is short too though, sure his could use a lot more detail but dont -1 someone just because, let him know what he can do better. [/quote]

[quote][url='/user/583865']parkyy[/url] said previously: [quote][url='/user/584732']Somethin Like The Void[/url] said previously: -1 Just gonna be consistent here, the backstory is really short. My advice is make a life story. Take a look at mine if you're running low on ideas. Yours is short too though, sure his could use a lot more detail but dont -1 someone just because, let him know what he can do better. [/quote] [/quote] Look more closely next time, it links to the more in-depth background. https://docs.google.com/document/d/1KKMndu84viCV_WU9rAeXg_QRoAU0BI6qMmjScSeH-BQ/edit?usp=sharing

ok void ill try to make it alot better as much as possible

+1 Really active and cool guy.